Back when I could:
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It’s shit all right
Looks alright. As far as I can tell with the work you’ve provided, you’re headed in the right direction. I’d recommend practicing line art as well as adding more direction to the shading. Keep up the good work. Fuck you guys for not having anything constructive to say.
Feels like the TV one is a tad too smashed together. The perspective is a tad odd as well when compared to a character.
Gave it a go myself to mess around, but I’m going to call it a computer monitor. The screen colors you chose are actually quite nice.
I also tried to make the screen feel more round. I’m on the fence about it, but here’s to hoping you guys see it as curved.
The other hat on the other hand feels more in line with the perspective of the character, but you might want to make it seem a bit more leaned back. It’s also very hard edged with the way the light is applied to it. Might want to round it out a little. I don’t really have a comment for the heads.