Story Line

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 2:46pm

Heres my story line…

Any suggestions?

Kondie · May 2, 2011, 3:29pm

Make it better.

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 3:30pm

Lol… Like how though? What should i add/edit?

Onijustin · May 2, 2011, 3:30pm

Replace evil diamonds(demonds) with kittens. Villain protagonist. =P

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 3:32pm

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 3:48pm

RileyFiery;71112:

Once, long ago in a not too distant time. A young and naive child living in a world with monsters, heroes, and myth; dreams of their future. The child’s dream is to grow up and achieve something of myth like in the legends that are told over and over, time and time again. Everyday is spent vanquishing imaginary monsters or conquering ghostly villages, and every night is spent listening to fables of ole’ that have been passed down through time itself. After ten years slowly ease by like a tortoise racing across the land; the child is older, wiser, taller, and stronger. Now the child whom once dreamed of conquering far off worlds and their people, or becoming the knight whom vanquishes evil, is ready for their first step into the world.

The roads of fate may not be entirely clear to which path this very special child of destiny will take. It is up to you; become this child and guide them in a way you see fit. Will you take the high road, or will you … regrettably be tainted by the darker, cynical low road? Become a hero or a villain of legend. Fate is in your hands …

How the hell am i aspost to fit that on a sign? xD Though ill use it

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 3:56pm

Nah, i put it on a sign when u enter, it automatically pops up

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Though thanks! You have many talents riley…

–Closed Thread–

CrossFire · May 2, 2011, 4:56pm

Well Riley, come on later and look… i managed to fit it on a sign

Darkblade · May 5, 2011, 8:28pm

Cross ill also take a look and see what i can do…

Spooon · May 7, 2011, 6:33pm

LOL WHAT STORY LINE!?

CrossFire · May 12, 2011, 2:18pm

Just finished it today!

hosler · May 12, 2011, 10:09pm

that story makes me want to throw up. sounds like you’re trying too hard. a real plot would be like this: you were unlucky enough to be born in a world where dragons are always trying to kill you. so now you gotta deal with it the only way you know how. with some badass weapons and magic.

tricxta · May 12, 2011, 11:26pm

The grammar is pretty shotty as well x_x

tricxta · May 13, 2011, 12:11am

ino its got a good base but all the possibilities included in it make it seem quite lame

Spooon · May 14, 2011, 8:11am

Nipple stand.